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英文作文弱點

從訂下英文作文加強計畫至今,我已練習了多篇英文作文,其中我發現了幾處不足,並決定加以改進,拿我寫的最差的113年英文作文為例。  我應該學習更好的使用轉折語,並加強文法,主要還是文法錯誤較多。

英文作文110

  Recently, a famous tourist attraction in Taiwan is appealing to travelers around the country, a spectacular flower field, known for it's massive beautiful flowers, but it had been reported that some courtless tourists were stepped right onto the flowers, which has devastated the eco systems and tremendously damaged the scenary of the flowerfield.      From a tourist point of view, I think it was a very shameful behave to ignore the sign and step right onto those beautiful flowers, because of this act, the owner of the flower field may lost tens of thousands of dollars, and it could break the trust between the owner and the travelers, the owner might eract fences to ristrict tourists from getting closer to appreciate to the vibrant flowers. I think the reason why causing this horoble thing is the lack of conscience, because of they were not taught to respect to each other, they were only taught to score high in tests and peform well in their academic performance, bu...

學測作文加強計畫

英文:每周1.3.5寫一篇,計畫從11分進步到15分以上,著重加強摹寫,使文章層次更深,並探索結尾該如何書寫。 國文:每周2.4.6寫知性題一篇,週日寫情意題1篇,著重加強進一步的表達,探討題目背後更複雜的面向,使文章層次提升,並利用摹寫技巧,使讀者身臨其境。

學測36天學科加強計畫

 學測剩36天了,剛考完的模考卻讓我感受到了危機感,各科都有待加強,自然和數學方面更是慘不忍睹,因此我決定透過規律的計畫對我的成績進行全方位的提升。 國文計畫:每日複習一篇15篇古文或AB類選文,並加強字音字形能力。 國寫計畫:每周寫知性題3篇,情議題2篇,並觀看優良作文範例與解說。 英文計畫:每日寫閱讀測驗,背50個單字,寫6句翻譯句子,每周寫2篇英文作文。 數學計畫:著重加強特定單元:直線與圓、多項式、排列組合、機率、向量、矩陣。每日寫15題並檢討。 地科計劃:每周複習3次,著重加強特定單元:天文、地質、氣象。 生物計劃:每周複習3次,加強單元:演化、細胞構造。 化學計劃:每周複習3次,加強實驗、濃度計算 物理計劃:每周複習3次,加速度、力、功與能量 數學、自然須加強閱讀速度,因此要買模擬題本來練習!

114/10/22

 Yesterday was a really odd day, and because I was busy yesterday, so I write yesterday's diary today. Why do I say yesterday was odd, because when I played basketball yesterday afternoon on the PE class, I constantly hitted some deep 3's when I was competing in a 3 pointer contest between my classmates, and I even hitted a logo shot with only two attempts.  However, bad thing happened when I was returning back to home, an fucking old idiot just crashed into me with his bike, because he didn't even look around when he was about to pull out, and a god damn bike collision broke out, thanks to there wasn't any injury and damage in both us and our bike, and he apologized to me instantly, or I would definitely have blamed him to death. ✅ 修正版(Only light edits) Yesterday was a really odd day, and because I was busy, I’m writing yesterday’s diary today. Why do I say yesterday was odd? Because when I played basketball yesterday afternoon in PE class, I kept hitting some deep thr...

114/10/15

 Today I finished the mid-term exam with both joy and pity. In the morning, I was taking math exam, and a simple question stocked me for a long time, so I decided to skip it and do it later, but when I finally came up with the answer, I filled it wrong on my bubble sheet, and it is really depressing. In the afternoon, I wasn't looking forward to my physics exam, because the chapters of it are hard as fuck, but when I actually writing it, I found it much more easier than I expected before, and I even have a chance to pass the exam this time, now I'm really excited to have a good grades on it.

114/10/3

     This evening was totally a disaster to me, all of the bad things was started with my teacher, because she delayed our dismissed time, so I couldn't get any Ubike near my school.      In order to lend the Ubike, I went to the opposite direction from the metro stop, so I have to walk a very long distance to get to the metro stop, and I've waste to much time walking. So when I get to the metro stop, it was full of people, and I hate the condition.      What makes my mood low is my teacher wasn't first time doing so, and those shit things like take a detour way, crowed in the metro just makes me feel anxious, because I could have done those things better, and the god damn teacher just unapproved it, wasting my fucking time.