114/8/18

 Today I reviewed biology, and learned some knowledge about taxonomy, taxonomy is classify of species. 

There are seven level in the taxonomy, from far to close are Kingdom(界), Phylum(門), Class(綱), Order(目), Family(科), Genus(屬), Species(種).

In comparison of two spicies, the more they resemble, the closer their taxonomy are. For example, tiger and monkey, who's relationship is closer to mankind, tiger shares the same class with mankind, while monkey shares the same order, so monkey has the closer relationship than tiger has to mankind.


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Today I reviewed biology and learned some knowledge about taxonomy. Taxonomy is the classification of species.

There are seven levels in taxonomy. From broad to specific, they are Kingdom (界), Phylum (門), Class (綱), Order (目), Family (科), Genus (屬), and Species (種).

When comparing two species, the more they resemble each other, the closer their taxonomy is. For example, between a tiger and a monkey, which one is closer to mankind? The tiger shares the same Class with humans, while the monkey shares the same Order. Therefore, the monkey has a closer relationship to mankind than the tiger does.


🔎 改錯重點

  • classify of species → classification of species:用名詞「classification」比較正確。

  • seven level → seven levels:需要複數。

  • spicies → species:拼字錯誤。

  • who's relationship → which one is closer:避免用錯的「who’s」,用更清楚的問句方式。

  • closer their taxonomy are → closer their taxonomy is:主詞單數要用 is

  • than tiger has to mankind → than the tiger does:結尾用 does 來避免重複

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