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✅ 修正版
This morning I finished the whole review of the GSAT material in Biology and Earth Science. It’s good news for me, because I will have more time to review other subjects like Math or Physics, which are both my weak points.
I had trouble with Math almost during my entire second year of high school. Though I have more comprehension in Math than before, I still need to get acquainted with the chapters I didn’t learn well earlier. As for Physics, it’s the same situation, but now I feel more comfortable when reviewing it.
Anyway, I need to get familiar with these two subjects as soon as possible. After all, time will never wait.
🔎 改錯重點
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realm of Biology → material in Biology:realm 太正式、不合用法,考試範圍可用 material。
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It's a good news → It’s good news:news 是不可數,不加 a。
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have more time review → more time to review:加 to。
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both of them are my weak points → which are both my weak points:改寫更自然。
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more comprehension with Math then before → more comprehension in Math than before:介系詞錯。
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chapters I've learned bad before → chapters I didn’t learn well earlier:learned bad 不正確。
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Whatever → Anyway:此處用 Anyway 更符合語境。
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get familiarize → get familiar:動詞錯誤。
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as soon as posible → as soon as possible:拼字錯誤。
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