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This morning I finished the whole review on the GSAT realm of Biology and Earth Science.  It's a good news to me, because I would have more time review on other subjects like Math or Physics, both of them are my weak points, I had trouble with Math in almost my first and second year in high school, though I have more comprehension with Math then before, I still need to get acquainted with the chapters I've learned bad before. As for physics, it's the same situation, but Now I feel more comfortable when reviewing it. Whatever, I need to get familiarize with the two subject as soon as posible, after all, time will never wait.

✅ 修正版

This morning I finished the whole review of the GSAT material in Biology and Earth Science. It’s good news for me, because I will have more time to review other subjects like Math or Physics, which are both my weak points.

I had trouble with Math almost during my entire second year of high school. Though I have more comprehension in Math than before, I still need to get acquainted with the chapters I didn’t learn well earlier. As for Physics, it’s the same situation, but now I feel more comfortable when reviewing it.

Anyway, I need to get familiar with these two subjects as soon as possible. After all, time will never wait.


🔎 改錯重點

  • realm of Biology → material in Biologyrealm 太正式、不合用法,考試範圍可用 material

  • It's a good news → It’s good newsnews 是不可數,不加 a。

  • have more time review → more time to review:加 to。

  • both of them are my weak points → which are both my weak points:改寫更自然。

  • more comprehension with Math then before → more comprehension in Math than before:介系詞錯。

  • chapters I've learned bad before → chapters I didn’t learn well earlierlearned bad 不正確。

  • Whatever → Anyway:此處用 Anyway 更符合語境。

  • get familiarize → get familiar:動詞錯誤。

  • as soon as posible → as soon as possible:拼字錯誤。

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